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[afdragon2006]

I've written some song lyrics and I want to know your opinions. and if you have any of your own please tell me about it.:jam:

^regular voice Artist: Deceived

* heavy metal voice Album: Mental Issues

Song: Mental Issues

By: afdragon2006





Verse 1 I hear the voices in my head don’t worship Jesus

worship me instead. *I am the one I am the king so

go ahead and give in to me.



Chorus ^But when I doubt the lord, I hear God I hear the word.

*Satan you can’t get me with the list you use. And if

you try you have mental issues. ^I have a savior who I

won’t refuse, *if you think I will you have mental issues.



Verse 2 I hear the voices in my mind, *worship me I’ll make it

worth your time. I can give you power I can make you

great. Join me and you don’t have to wait.





Verse 3 ^ I have the sword I have the word,* to fight off all the

evil in this world.^ And when Satan comes,* when he

comes.

 

[afdragon2006]

Give me your opinion. but It's a little corny compared to the first one.

^regular voice Artist: Deceived

* heavy metal voice Album: Mental Issues

Song: Rebellion

By: afdragon2006



Verse 1 When I get an attitude all the demons around me get in my

face. So I just walk away with disgrace on my face and I

can’t help but depressed that day.* But I’ve had enough

time to show I’m tough, to all the demons that tempt me.

I’ll stop the sin I will rebel.





Chorus ^This time I will fight back. I’m sick and tired of this so

I think I will just go out and rebel. This day nothing will

me when I com and if they try I’ll lunge out and rebel.

*IF YOU COME AT ME I’LL COME AT YOU

IF YOU COME AT ME I WILL REBEL.





Verse 2 ^ So here I am liven it up and keeping my salvation.

No more pain I feel good and don’t have to worry

anymore. * But Satan has to shoot me to the dirt

he wants to make me work he wants to make it hurt.

And I don’t want to put up with it anymore.







Verse 3 ^ I know God I am reborn, yet I have a friend who has

fallen into Satan’s torch.* So I gave him the word he

sees the light now he speaks these word in a roaring cry.

 

[afdragon2006]

This is one of my greatest songs.

Artist: Deceived

Album: Mental Issues
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Song: Self Secured
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Composer: afdragon2006
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Alone hiding a shell of sin, afraid



of what could happen if you come out.



But god says don’t be afraid. You’ll



safer if your saved. When demons



come to torment you just call on me



and I will be there for you. Come out



of your self security and find me. If



you ask for my help I will not forsake



you. Satan can’t touch you so come out.

 

[afdragon2006]

I have four others, but do not have them typed yet.:jam:

Artist: Deceived

Album: Mental Issues
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Song: Deaf, Mute, and Blind
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Composer: Chris Simmons
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I knew a boy who was a Christian

when I was taken over by sin. He

tried to tell me the word, but I

would not listen. He tried to show

me the way, but I did not see. He

said to me in his own way Jesus

was trying to talk to me, but I did

not respond. I learned that we were

of the same kind. It’s that we were

both deaf, mute, and blind. Mine

was spiritually, but his was physically.

I learned just because he couldn’t hear

It didn’t mean he could not hear God.

Just because he couldn’t speak it

didn’t mean he couldn’t preach the

word through his actions. Just because

he couldn’t see it didn’t mean he

couldn’t see the light of Christ.

Because of his commitment to God

I got washed in the blood of Jesus.



wasn't it awsome :clap .

 

[dawny0826]

Way to go! Keep up the good work.

 

[QTpi]

Wow! Those are great lyrics! Like Dawny said, "keep up the good work!"
:jiggy:

 

[Buttercup]

I think those are some very poignant lyrics and I hope you continue writing! Let us know how things go....

 

[Mister_T]

Very nice. I'm sure there are alot of people out there who can appreciate those lyrics. Myself being one of them. Keep up the good work

 

[Mike182]

im interested as to what they will sound like with music

but you've got some good lyrics, keep at it :clap

 

[afdragon2006]

this is my logo

 

[frenchgirl]

you'l be a great musician one day, just keep doing what you believe in.

 

[astarath]

not bad not to bad at all