hello my friends
Debater Slayer ,
LuisDantas
I just want to reply to this post #20
by this way :
Just to let you understand my point,let's suppose Israel is a person.
If a person did and doing bad things against a group of people ,then he suddenlly because of his good deed to someone of them (because the golden goal "enemy of my enemey is my friend") does give him the full card in humanitarian , by drop what he done before ? Why humanitarian is disppear when war begin against Hamas or Hezbollah by killing the civilians?
Where is the humanitarian in occupating West Bank and make Palestinians like hell everyday ?
There are several mistakes in the above post. Again, I'll break it down bit by bit.
Just to let you understand my point,let's suppose Israel is a person.
The first mistake is that you didn't leave a space between the comma and "let's." The second mistake—although this is mainly a personal preference of mine—is that you said "let's suppose Israel
is a person." I would write it thus instead: "Let's suppose Israel
were a person." This is called the subjunctive mood, and one of its uses is expressing hypothetical or imaginary situations—that is, it is an
irrealis mood.
If a person did and doing bad things against a group of people ,then he suddenlly because of his good deed to someone of them (because the golden goal "enemy of my enemey is my friend") does give him the full card in humanitarian , by drop what he done before ? Why humanitarian is disppear when war begin against Hamas or Hezbollah by killing the civilians?
I don't really understand the above paragraph well as it is currently worded; would you mind rewording it before I can start correcting its grammar?
I can point out a few spelling mistakes, though: it is
suddenly, not
suddenlly. Also, the correct spellings of two other misspelled words in your post are
enemy and
disappear.
Where is the humanitarian in occupating West Bank and make Palestinians like hell everyday ?
First, it is
occupying, not
occupating. The noun is
occupation. You should have also said
humanitarianism;
humanitarian is an adjective, not a noun.
Second, your sentence lacks parallelism: two of its consecutive elements are structured differently. You said
make where you should have said
making; you first used the gerund and then used a verb instead of a second gerund, which should be
making. So the sentence would read like this:
Where is the humanitarianism in occupying the West Bank and making Palestinians' lives hell [there is no need for the word "like" here] every day?"
Also,
everyday, as one word, means "typical of ordinary days," as in, "Everyday life is rough for the working class," whereas
every day as two words is an adverb, meaning "occurring or continuing on a day-to-day basis." So it is "I go to work every day" but "Work is an everyday activity for me."
By the way, I specifically avoided using the word
daily because it can be both an adjective and an adverb depending on how it is used.
I'll correct the remaining mistakes if you rewrite the second paragraph; I need to understand it first before correcting it.