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Do you haiku? ^_^

Wu Wei

ursus senum severiorum and ex-Bisy Backson
Start with number five
Then go to number seven
End with number five
 

Wu Wei

ursus senum severiorum and ex-Bisy Backson
A rhyme not needed
Don't you know this is haiku
Rhyme is for sissies
 

The Anointed

Well-Known Member
I saw the doctor
And told him about my hip
It was just so sore

He said, that's because
That hip's seventy years old
You must accept that

Fancy that I said
This one's seventy also
Nothing's wrong with it
 

Wu Wei

ursus senum severiorum and ex-Bisy Backson
it is time to stop
no more posting this evening
goodnight to you all
 

The Anointed

Well-Known Member
The hot barren earth
Drinks of the falling dew drops
Which are of no worth...……….haiku #1

With the rising sun
The dew drops steam and shrival
And then they are gone......……...…..haihu #2

The man prays for rain
His dehydrated body
Praying, waits in vain...…………..haiku #3

The dried bones--bleached white
Strewed round the dry water hole
Glow in the moonlight...……...…..haiku #4

They rattle and walk
To the man whose swollen tongue
Cannot scream or talk...………..haiku #5

They sing songs of death
Soothing the soul of he who
Longs for his last breath...……...haiku #6

The hot sun awakes
The crows from the branch above
Feed by a dry lake...……………..haiku #7
 

Wu Wei

ursus senum severiorum and ex-Bisy Backson
Needles in my knees
Sitting in my recliner
It hurst if I move

Recliner broken
Had to go buy a new one
Will be here Friday
 
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