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My hello message

Kramer

Kramer

New Member
I figure i should make my first post one that expresses my feelings. I look forward to joining this community. I was once a member long ago, but many complications made it hard for me to continue (not complications in the board, but in my life). anywho, here's my poem. please critic if you fancy doing so.


Shedding the weight of flesh

My soul does fly afresh

Free like the flittering bird

Unburdened with the written word

Shinning with silver wings

The soul doth loudly sing



To and fro it flutters about

Free from the slightest doubt

Sparkles as a mountain creak

It preens itself with golden beak

Free from stains of sin

A new life it does begin
 
michel

michel

Administrator Emeritus
Staff member
Hi Kramer,

And Welcome back ! - since you have made this your 'introduction', I hope you won't mind my having moved the thread to the 'Are you new to religious forum ?' slot.......

Nice poem, by the way...........;)
 
QTpi

QTpi

Mischevious One
Hi, Kramer. Welcome to Religious Forums. We're happy to have you with us again and hope you enjoy your stay. :jiggy:
 
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