Kramer
New Member
I figure i should make my first post one that expresses my feelings. I look forward to joining this community. I was once a member long ago, but many complications made it hard for me to continue (not complications in the board, but in my life). anywho, here's my poem. please critic if you fancy doing so.
Shedding the weight of flesh
My soul does fly afresh
Free like the flittering bird
Unburdened with the written word
Shinning with silver wings
The soul doth loudly sing
To and fro it flutters about
Free from the slightest doubt
Sparkles as a mountain creak
It preens itself with golden beak
Free from stains of sin
A new life it does begin
Shedding the weight of flesh
My soul does fly afresh
Free like the flittering bird
Unburdened with the written word
Shinning with silver wings
The soul doth loudly sing
To and fro it flutters about
Free from the slightest doubt
Sparkles as a mountain creak
It preens itself with golden beak
Free from stains of sin
A new life it does begin