Forgot to mention his will is done through his people that defend what is right, and not defending their "rights".
Ahhh, here is the rub. How do we determine what is ultimately right? I have people living in my community who claim to know God, and they believe so strongly that they are tuned to his Will that they force their beliefs on others. For example, they believe God doesn't want us drinking alcohol on Sundays, so by sheer force of numbers they impose their interpretation of God's Will on the rest of the community by making it illegal to purchase alcohol on Sundays.
Now, of course we could extend this particular debate to the political arena and question whether or not the democratic process is somewhat flawed by allowing the majority to force their views on the minority.
But it seems to me that as Christians, they should be willing to live and let live. If they don't want to drink on Sunday because they believe God's Will forbids it, then fine, they don't have to. But why do they choose to force their beliefs on me by means of political force?
I guess I shouldn't complain though, because having to suffer through a Sunday evening dinner without wine because I forgot to pick some up on Saturday isn't nearly as bad as having my head blown off by a religious extremists who is bombing an abortion clinic or waging jihad against infidels.
I sincerely mean no offense, but my point is this, it is all well and good to break out some pretty lyrical prose about proof that God is real. In my mind, there is nothing at all wrong with assumptions as to God's existence based on metaphorical evidence, such as God's heartbeat being perceived as the people who follow His path, and so on and so on. And really, the poetry of the OP was quite respectable, in my humble opinion.
However, I find it a little bit unsettling when people, poets or otherwise, believe they are carrying out God's Will.
Worship whomever you choose, as that is your right. But truly, if there is a God,
only He knows His Will, everybody else is just guessing.