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To those interested, Story 3 Chapter 1&2 is here..

SoulTYPE

Well-Known Member
CHAPTER 1 - A new foe
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"My it's getting late," Soul threw another bread crumb to the birds, and looked over at Runt.
Runt sat on the park bench, her head lowered as she spoke. "Poor Ceridwen being killed in the Mind machine explosion. We did our best."

Soul gazed across the park, bright from the dusk sun. "We best go. I am really enjoying this holiday we are having." Soul hugged Runt...

Their embrace was interrupted by a 4 door porsche (?) roaring into the park, skidding to a halt. Loud techno music blared out of the windows. "I hate Chingy," Runt crossed her arms.
Tex_Admin glanced out the window of the porsche, eyeing the couple up and down.
"Geetings," he nodded, "I have come back once again."
"You consistent ba..!" Soul taunted, " you are more persuasive than my spamming!"

Tex ignored Soul, leaning his arm on the porsche window. "I have a new plan," Tex sighed, "only this time you cannot stop me."
"But we have twice before," Runt raised her hands to her hips.

"Yes. But now I cannot be defeated." Tex snapped his fingers and the rear door opened.

A woman with dark hair tied back emerged, wearing dark sunglasses and a black trench coat.
"No, it cannot be you!" Runt cried.
"It is me," Ceridwen replied, "you guys thought I died in that explosion? Huh. I merely faked my death. I was tired of leading you guys through our missions. You guys never pulled your weight.
and I had to do all the battle. So now I am working for Tex_Admin."
"But why?" Soul asked, shocked.
"I just explained to you why," Ceridwen sighed, "bt I have no time for Miss aerobics and Mr Houdini."

Tex grinned triumphantly as Ceridwen got back in to the car. Tex floored the accelerator and sent a pile of mud all over Runt's picnic basket and blanket, before taking off into the sunset.
"Let's go!" Soul ordered Runt to get into their ferrari, and the chase began

Chapter 2 - Road Chase
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Tex saw the ferrari behind them so he made a mad turn to the left. The road broke out in to the highway, and soon the cars were in a mad chase amongst the other cars travelling along Route 55.

Tex swerved in and out of traffic, ignoring the beeps and yells from other drivers. Soul barely dodged a collision with a small Volkswagen driven by MICH, and caught up to Tex. Both cars were doing 70 in a 50 zone, and caused several pileups along the way.

"Floor it Tex!" Ceridwen yelled, "they are gaining on us!"

A bridge opened up ahead, and a traffic patrolman walked across the road with a stop sign.
Tex ignored the signal and kept going, brushing the patrolman as he whizzed past.

"What is he doing?!!" Soul cried "he'll miss it!"
Runt pushed her own foot down on the accelerator and pursued the chase. "No! We won't make it!" Soul insisted, "the bridge is opened!"

Soon Tex's 4-door could be seen flying into the air, up the slightly open bridge, Woosh! and with a thud, the car landed on the other side of the highway, and keptgoing.

"We won't make it!" Soul yelled, "hold on tight!"
But they did! The car landed with a thud on the other side and the chase continued! But Tex was well in front.

But wait! Who was this? A black Mercedes pulled out of nowhere, ahead of Tex!
"If we hit that Mercedes up there we're goners!" Ceridwen pounded.
Tex snorted and swerved to the right making a turn into the right lane and kept going.

However, Soul was unlucky. He pulled to a halt, and missed the Mercedes by two inches.
"We lost him!" Runt sulked.

The Mercedes door opened up and out stood a tall, short haired lady in black. "I have been expecting you," she spoke solemly.........
 

FyreBrigidIce

Returning Noob
SoulTYPE01 said:
Unexpected twist? Where? LOL.

Other than the posts warning us ahead of time. The unexpected twist of Cerridwen changing sides.

I actually responded from the standpoint of someone who did not read your posts telling us ahead of time.




FBI
 

SoulTYPE

Well-Known Member
At least there is one that can't. :) As long as one person is interested, I will keep posting them.

Meh.
 

SoulTYPE

Well-Known Member
I really should kill off Tex, hey? He is probably getting old now and we may see him lining up at the unemployment office, looking for his next story to appear in.
 

No*s

Captain Obvious
You just need to give him prison grays, have him get thrown into and get out of prison, and yell quotes from Luthor :D.
 

Feathers in Hair

World's Tallest Hobbit
Whooo-hoo! I'm loving it!

No*s said:
You just need to give him prison grays, have him get thrown into and get out of prison, and yell quotes from Luthor :D.
I'm ashamed to say I love Lex... I was a "Smallville" fan for awhile, so I think of him fondly.
 

No*s

Captain Obvious
Hehe. I haven't watched much of it. I was thinking more of the old school Lex from the sixties and seventies (he was better before he got his power suit). I think they may well be bringing that Lex back, though. One can only hope.
 

No*s

Captain Obvious
It just seemed like too much of a teen soap operah. I watch and read Superman for one reason: Superman. Smallville cared too much about who was dating who, who liked who, and then, they tack on a cliche villain. It just wasn't my bag of beans (that, and they got the the chars completely wrong...except for Luthor lol).
 

SoulTYPE

Well-Known Member
No*s said:
It just seemed like too much of a teen soap operah.
My stories are RF soap operas with action.

No*s said:
cared too much about who was dating who, who liked who, and then, they tack on a cliche villain.
There's 80% of US TV :biglaugh: Buffy springs to Mind.
 

Feathers in Hair

World's Tallest Hobbit
I agree. Nobody cares about who is dating whom in your stories! They've got other things to worry about. (Much more dire things!)

I'd argue about "Buffy", though, but maybe that's just my knee- jerk reaction. They started out with the villan- of-the week format, but progressed to a variety of other story lines.
 
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