usfan
Well-Known Member
Ok, I've suggested these 2 as 'edits' to Mr Saxe's original, but the literary critics howl in protest, of bias!, and hatred!
So, it is only fair that i should accomodate these aggrieved victims of literary innuendo with a more friendly, pro-atheist stanza..
"Your hatred of reality,
Deludes you to envision,
Imaginary fantasies,
Without any provision."
The last entreated earnestly,
Bereft of cold derision.
The other six, cut to the quick,
Exclaimed, "You are so kind!
To remedy the practice
Of a sad and faulty mind,
It's obvious to everyone,
You see, but we are blind!"
The last, extending empty hands,
Disdainfully, he hissed,
'You fools!', said he, 'it's obvious,
Your brains are in a twist!
This fiction of an elephant, does not even exist!'
The first said, 'Gentle seekers,
E'en tho' we cannot see,
Agreement, is our target,
And i am your advisee,
To end our sad divisions:
"Understanding by decree!"'
So, it is only fair that i should accomodate these aggrieved victims of literary innuendo with a more friendly, pro-atheist stanza..
"Your hatred of reality,
Deludes you to envision,
Imaginary fantasies,
Without any provision."
The last entreated earnestly,
Bereft of cold derision.
The other six, cut to the quick,
Exclaimed, "You are so kind!
To remedy the practice
Of a sad and faulty mind,
It's obvious to everyone,
You see, but we are blind!"