Very well, since you ask -- let us begin.
"God created and heavens.... and the earth." You cannot even quite define what the difference is between "the heavens" and "the earth." Okay, let's assume that means "God created the earth -- plus everything else which is so astronomically much more as to make the earth look like an afterthought, a bit of leftover nothing." But there is nothing that you can use to show that this "creation" event -- if it even happened the way that you think it did -- is true. And in fact, the evidence from all the science done in cosmology over the last 100 -plus years strongly suggests that it's utter nonsense.
"This account is based upon you, the observer. To the observer the whole heavens revolve around the earth. It's all relative." Yes, well, wherever I am, I'm the centre of my universe, since I am the observe. That's relative to be sure, but for me to make the statement that "because this is how I observe it, the world must revolve around me" is simply ludicrous. It says, "I don't know how to think -- I cannot extrapolate."
"And then the land or earth appears above the water." You cannot begin to presume that's how this planet formed, and it is, in fact, scientifically, extremely unlikely. This planet, while it does come with a lot of ocean, and a great sea of atmosphere, is almost totally made of up of solid material. So to suggest that there was this big, watery thing that eventually heaved up land masses is nonsense. Much more realistic is to understand that our gravity is sufficient to hold an atmosphere, that atmosphere can contain much water vapour, which can condense and fall to earth, which earth can then support it's presence in various depressions...and so on. But to suggest that there was this big "water world" and lands (and cathedrals, a la Debussy's Cathedrale Engloutie, a favourite piece of mine) is silly.
"And man appeared, last." You claim that this is "the last fact." But it ain't true. I can tell you that cocker spaniels, AIDS and Caucasians all appeared long after "man" appeared.