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Smart_Guy

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Premium Member
...bring a tear to my eye, Smart Guy?

Sure, here, have a tasty meet bun, BSM1 (Bee Es Em One)!

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(When people eat something tasty in cartoons, their eyes run down with tears.
 

Smart_Guy

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Premium Member
But I can turn it dimmer, Lewisnotmiller...

(It won't sound right in Australian accent. I use American accent)
 

methylatedghosts

Can't brain. Has dumb.
.....you aint gotz ta know I'm on parole, Jawhawker Soule!

Ooh frubals for that one! clever use of the rhyme in know, parole and soule, and I don't know if you intended it, but you've also got secondary imperfect rhyme on the offbeats (the vowels in gotz, on and jayhAWker sound close enough to put a mild stress on them for the offbeat...)


Edit: I just read it aloud and found another rhyming triplet in ta, PArole, and jayhawkER (pronounce with an A on the end)...

Girl, you're on fire, this could be an Eminem song!
 
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Buttercup

Veteran Member
Ooh frubals for that one! clever use of the rhyme in know, parole and soule, and I don't know if you intended it, but you've also got secondary imperfect rhyme on the offbeats (the vowels in gotz, on and jayhAWker sound close enough to put a mild stress on them for the offbeat...)


Edit: I just read it aloud and found another rhyming triplet in ta, PArole, and jayhawkER (pronounce with an A on the end)...

Girl, you're on fire, this could be an Eminem song!
I'm happy to have FINALLY gotten some love for this one. :cigar: :cigar::cigar: Thanks, Methyghost!
 
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