Do you haiku? ^_^

[Daemon Sophic]

Baker and Math Prof
argue. ”Pie are round!” says one.
”Not true! Pi*(r^2)”

 

[Martin]

Less words, more meaning,
A beautiful brevity,
Not superfluous.

 

[ChristineM]

I saw a nice pie
On the floor of a pig sty
Trip, pie in the eye

 

[RestlessSoul]

Mrs Wu made pie
Made a Wheat crust by mistake
Pie still delicious

My Mrs did that
Made an apple crumble
More crunchy than crumbly

 

[Martin]

Michaelangelo's David

Chip, chip, chip, chip, chip
Marble shards fly, revealing
Perfect human form.

 

[Wu Wei]

Another Pieku

cut cut cut cut cut
for many apple slices
apple pie is great

 

[Daemon Sophic]

Winds pick up their pace.
The forest floor is flooded
with drying brown leaves.

 

[ChieftheCef]

Pie
Pie pie pie
Pie Pie

 

[Wu Wei]

Pie
Pie pie pie
Pie Pie

no no no no no
no five seven five
pie pie pie pie pie

correctly

pie pie pie pie pie
pie pie pie pie pie pie pei
pie pie pie pie pie


basically...you needed more pie.... and that is a good thing

 

[Viker]

Balloons drift softly,
Butterflies dance on the sun—
Joy fills the still air.

 

[Viker]

Words in gentle form,
Nature’s breath in three short lines
Silence speaks in verse.

 

[ChieftheCef]

no no no no no
no five seven five
pie pie pie pie pie

correctly

pie pie pie pie pie
pie pie pie pie pie pie pei
pie pie pie pie pie


basically...you needed more pie.... and that is a good thing

I see what you're saying but it doesn't fit aesthetically and it is a poem, not slam.

 

[ChristineM]

I see what you're saying but it doesn't fit aesthetically and it is a poem, not slam.

It is a Japanese art form

 

[ChieftheCef]

It is a Japanese art form

Yes, an artform. And what is the key defining principle of art forms? Aesthetics.

 

[ChristineM]

Yes, an artform. And what is the key defining principle of art forms? Aesthetics.

The key to this art form is 5 syllables, 7 syllables and 5 syllables.
Anything else is not haiku

 

[ChieftheCef]

The key to this art form is 5 syllables, 7 syllables and 5 syllables.
Anything else is not haiku

The key to any artform is aesthetics. So have put it in a similar ratio so that it attains some kind of aesthetics. If you have something ugly, like yours, then it'd be better if it wasn't made. I know idiots definitely like it. Don't bother me, I won't bother you.

 

[ChristineM]

The key to any artform is aesthetics. So have put it in a similar ratio so that it attains some kind of aesthetics. If you have something ugly, like yours, then it'd be better if it wasn't made. I know idiots definitely like it. Don't bother me, I won't bother you.

Do not haiku then, why did you impose it on the haiku thread?

 

[ChieftheCef]

Do not haiku then, why did you impose it on the haiku thread?

Christine, Christine
Head strong autist
Doesn't know how to make friends that would let it slide
So she whispers strong into her coffee

 

[Balthazzar]

She whispers strong to
the wind howling in the spring
for the rain to fall

and bring down the tree
leaning over the roof top
for remodeling.

 

[ChristineM]

Christine, Christine
Head strong autist
Doesn't know how to make friends that would let it slide
So she whispers strong into her coffee

The cef doesn't know artistic poetry from street slang.
And I'm happy wherebi am without abuse thanks