Ok, so I sent the story in today!
I made a few little tweaks over the weekend, so here is the end result. I took everyone's feedback in mind while I edited, so thank you all so much for your help!
Fireflies
I remember a lot about the day before they brought me here. They all said I wouldn't...
Whether you like it or not, there will always be comparisons in religion. It's what makes people question religion, and without questions, people will follow things blindly. Questions breed knowledge. There is no harm in that, unless you're (as in the general "you", not YOU as in Otherright) so...
Ahh, that's also kind of a misconception. Gun violence in places like British Columbia is USA high. While most provinces are more peaceful, and we don't have constant shooting deaths, there are still bad guys with guns running around. They just don't shoot everyone that walks by them, is all...
Jebus. When I was in grade one, I wrote a story with accompanied pictures, of Freddy Kruger fighting Jason Voorhees.... how come no one came to my house to strip search all the monsters in my closet?
Or at least my brothers for making watch movies like that when I was 6....
Thanks Jaiket!
I haven't sent it in yet. I'll enter it probably on Monday, giving me the weekend to just make sure I think it's as perfect as it's going to be.
As for that one sentence, I think I'm going to write it like each of the suggestions that have been made here, and then see what I...
OK! Where to start...
I guess we'll begin here:
Sid Vicious, Lola (who belongs to my mom), and Adonis. Min Pin, Shepard Mix and English Mastiff, respectively.
Black Jack
Sally Girl
Fudge-eo
Tisiphone
Queen Isis
Indiana Bela Lugosi Jones, AKA Bubs
And finally, Frank Sinatra
Okie dokie, so Jason and I are planning on going on vacation this year, so I'd like some suggestions.
We want warm weather, sandy beaches and clear blue water. Also, all inclusive resorts!
It doesn't matter if it's in Mexico or the Dominican Republic, or Bahamas or WHATEVER, I'd just like...
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What I'd like to know is, exactly WHY was a "therapist" meeting with a one year old, and what was expected from that meeting? That's incredibly creepy to me.
Also, at a year old, children aren't really walking yet. So how did a one year old crawl it's way far enough out of it's...