Jesus H...I was not attempting to write out a formal syllogism - that is not the only way to make an argument - let alone a counter argument. I was attacking a premise.
If you want to validate Colyvan's syllogism you have to define "mathematical entity" in a way that does not pre-suppose its ontological reality.
As for your reformulation of his first premise - you must know that it is absolutely preposterous to suggest that:
"
all scientific realists are ontologically committed to all and only the entities that are indispensable to our best scientific theories"
which (bold part) is what you originally posted before editing the claim to an unsubstantiated assertion that such a reformulation could be done.
Reformulated like this as an AII-1 the argument would go:
P1:
all scientific realists are ontologically committed to all and only the entities that are indispensable to our best scientific theories
P2: some mathematical entities are indispensable etc...
C: all scientific realists are ontologically committed to some mathematical entities
It is a valid syllogism iff P1 is true, but it is patently obvious that some scientific realists are not ontologically committed to
all 'indispensable' "entities" because some scientific realists might very well hold that mathematical entities, whilst indispensable to our understanding of the world, are nothing more than conceptual formalisms or fictions
about the ontologically real world that are indispensable only if we wish to "understand" the world but not genuinely ontological parts of it. In fact, they could argue that (at least some) mathematical 'objects' are not 'entities' at all and can have no independent or objective existence apart from either the objective reality they describe or the minds that conceive of them. Neither of these positions is contrary to scientific realism so P1 is not a valid premise.
Even in Colyvan's original form, the argument relies on an unexplained "ought" - why "ought" we "to have ontological commitment to all and only the entities that are indispensable to our best scientific theories"?
And P2 is questionable depending on what is meant by "entity". As I have now pointed out several times, if we are calling mathematical statements "entities" we are already assuming they have a distinct and independent existence - how is that not an "ontological commitment"? But this is in the premise, not the conclusion. At best, the language choice in this formulation reifies a concept prematurely. We are calling the "picture of reality" that math presents as if it were the reality itself. At worst, it renders the argument circular (as I said) by making the very ontological commitment in the premise that the argument is designed to establish as its conclusion. If you still don't see that - and I will not be surprised if you don't - I don't see any point continuing the discussion on the indispensability argument.
Moving to your other formulations:
P1: All central terms of fundamental scientific laws are genuinely referential.
P2: All central terms of fundamental scientific laws are quantities (/mathematical relations).
C: Therefore, some quantities (/mathematical relations) are genuinely referential.
This, assuming I understand your use of the term "referential" correctly, merely proves that some mathematical quantities and relations point to real entities in the external world - rather than being purely linguistic or conceptual constructs of the mind - but that does not prove that the mathematical 'objects' are themselves ontologically real - they could still be (as Whitehead and Russell once hoped) pointing to a deeper logical reality on which the math is constructed, or as a physicalist might claim, attributive or purely conceptual statements
about the ontological realities they describe. Again, it is a valid syllogism (as long as we are not making too strong a claim with "genuinely referential" - but it does nothing to prove the veracity of the thesis of mathematical realism.
And the second...
P1: All entities (/structures) discovered by physicists using the scientific method are objectively existing.
P2: Some mathematical relations are entities (/structures) discovered by physicists using the scientific method.
C: Therefore, some mathematical relations are objectively existing.
...makes the same invalid assumption in the second premise that Colyvan's version of the indispensability argument makes - namely that mathematical relations are 'entities' - but unless one can prove that these mathematical relations have an independent reality this is not a valid assumption - and even if it is, it presupposes the ontological reality you are attempting to establish by means of the argument.
In this argument, I am not sure that your first premise is not really a tautology - in terms of this argument, what would be the difference between an "entity discovered by physicists" and an "objectively existing" thing? P1 in this argument looks more like a definition than a premise. Maybe it is the definition I have been asking for, in which case you are saying that "entities" are "objectively existing things that are discovered by physicists using the scientific method". In that case, perhaps you do have a valid argument for the "objective existence" of some mathematical relations - but is there any reason that "objective existence" entails or necessitates "ontological reality"? How so?
Quite apart from invalid premises etc...
Suppose I wanted to borrow from your last argument and use the same form of syllogism to establish the truth of the thesis of physicalism - I could try this:
P1: All entities discovered by physicists using the scientific method are objectively existing.
P2: Some entities discovered by physicists using the scientific method are physical objects (which I define as 'things' existing as matter and/or energy).
C: Therefore, some objectively existing things are physical objects.
Again this might be a valid syllogism (but that still hinges on the definition of 'entity'), and it is - unlike the arguments you presented for mathematical realism - unquestionably true that some objectively existing things are physical objects. But it proves absolutely nothing about the thesis of physicalism (I'm sure you will not disagree with that).