To me, it sounds like a false comparison, I mean the point of the comparison doesn't seem clear to me.
Here's what I mean:
If you had something like: "So I don't see that one who is sincere in their belief in Christ as having a need for validation by just sharing with others, whereas someone less sincere might", that would make sense because you'd be contrasting someone with a sincere belief against someone with a less sincere belief.
If you had said: "It's fine for someone to reject the belief as long as they're willing to give it some honest consideration, yet skeptics often seems bent on arguing, debating, and preaching against such belief", you would be pointing out the acceptability of one reaction as opposed to another.
What you actually said: doesn't make a clear point.