Yeah uhm no.
You extensively use Christian/Messianic websites to prove your point. Which in itself is completely unimportant to Jews. You might as well quote Martians.
This is then coupled with the complete disregard for the opinions and beliefs of those which you want to address or let's call it what it is, lecture.
All in all you are the example of the "totally true Torah-believer" which we regularly see with Muslim and Christian fanatics who know it all better than anyone else. They then proceed to open Thread after Thread about how incredibly wise they are and how stupid everyone else is. After all they have seen the light and need to share their wisdom in a totally insulting manner.
Though you still miss something at the moment. Keep your style of writing but add excessive colouring. Not just one colour, at the very least 4.
And some form of Visions would also help. I'd try mushrooms if it were me.
Also if you write so much in capital letters you seem like one of those raging Internet kiddies. Which doesn't really help your point, though let's be honest no really cares.
So have fun, I am gonna be off and serve the evil Rabbi Overlords.